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lostboy
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New Hampshire, USA

0 posted 1999-11-23 04:38 PM


Wasn't looking for love in any way
But the feeling I got inside
The first time I looked at you
I got lost in your eyes
To me your smile is a shining star
You take my breath away
I hear your voice and think of an angel
On a bright warm summer day

I'll never break your heart or let you down
You won't hear me say goodbye
I see you always in my mind
I just simply close my eyes

Your the gold at the end of a rainbow
A flame that won't burn out
The princess from a fairytale
You're the one they wrote about
Fate may work to build a bridge
Between your heart and mine
We'll find a place where dreams are made
To withstand all of time

Your pictures hangs on the wall of my heart
Maybe love is on the way
'Cause this heart was made just for you
Now I can only pray

Do you think about me,
When you're trying to sleep
Do you pray the Lord each night
My heart you'll keep
Do we get together in your dreams
Do I hold you tight
If you wish upon a star
I hope you get your wish tonight

Good night, pleasant dreams to all!

© Copyright 1999 lostboy - All Rights Reserved
JennyLee
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1 posted 1999-11-23 09:15 PM


Beautiful lostboy...made my night. Such a pleasant wish filled with touching esteem


Jenny Lee

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.



Denise
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2 posted 1999-11-24 12:16 PM


Lovely wishes! Very beautiful peom, lostboy!
I enjoyed this very much.

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Denise


Sally S.
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3 posted 1999-11-24 12:26 PM


Hoping your wishes come true!!
A Romantic Heart
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4 posted 1999-11-24 01:58 AM


Your poem was lovely, I really liked the lines...The princess from the fairytale, and fate building a bridge between your heart and mine! I liked it all it was very, very romantic and dreamy.

Welcome to passions!

suthern
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5 posted 1999-11-24 07:31 AM


I like this very much... especially "Cause this heart was made just for you"... I know that feeling! *G*

By the way.... Welcome!

[This message has been edited by suthern (edited 11-24-1999).]

lostboy
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6 posted 1999-11-24 09:16 AM


Thanks so much. Your comments and welcomes mean a lot. There's nothing like a little romance when you feel the mood, eh?
poetFemmeFatale
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7 posted 1999-11-26 11:57 PM


AAhhhh....If I'm dreaming, don't wake me. This piece is so warm and magical - - very very nice. Gave me a bad case of the "warm fuzzies".... Am so glad I stumbled onto it!!

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Cuddlez
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8 posted 1999-11-27 01:20 AM


I can understand your feelings. Take heart, I thought the same exact thing of a guy in my church. My dreams came true. :-)
Corinne
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9 posted 1999-11-27 10:55 AM


In the words of Joni Mitchell: "Love can be so sweet."

Lovely and innocent, Lostboy!


Corinne

lostboy
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10 posted 1999-11-27 11:05 AM


Thank you Corrine, that was very nice of you to say
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
11 posted 1999-11-27 11:15 AM


Lostboy,
I don't think your lost
You've surely said your say.
And if she reads this poem
You're surely on your way.

Poet deVine
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12 posted 1999-11-27 11:17 AM


Welcome to the family! A lovely poem full of sweet romance....

Justbleu
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13 posted 1999-11-27 11:52 AM


This was a wonderful poem about your heartfelt truth!! Lovely piece!!

Keep it up...hope to see more!!

Bridgette

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"It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart."

lostboy
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14 posted 1999-11-27 01:45 PM


Thanks poet d, sy and bleu. It certainly does feel like family, thanks for the open arms!!
A Romantic Heart
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15 posted 1999-11-28 08:18 PM


Romance surely sets the mood! This poem would be most womens dream, to have such lovely expressions of words written about them!

I pray at night also!

I will pray for you to find the woman of your fairytale!

Pepper
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16 posted 1999-11-28 08:45 PM


ahhh, this Is so Romantic...with such beautiful sentiments...
lostboy this is a Wonderful piece....(sigh)...

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Tara Simms
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17 posted 1999-11-28 08:48 PM


Beautiful!
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