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Wish Upon A Star
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Wish Upon A Star |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
Wasn't looking for love in any way But the feeling I got inside The first time I looked at you I got lost in your eyes To me your smile is a shining star You take my breath away I hear your voice and think of an angel On a bright warm summer day I'll never break your heart or let you down You won't hear me say goodbye I see you always in my mind I just simply close my eyes Your the gold at the end of a rainbow A flame that won't burn out The princess from a fairytale You're the one they wrote about Fate may work to build a bridge Between your heart and mine We'll find a place where dreams are made To withstand all of time Your pictures hangs on the wall of my heart Maybe love is on the way 'Cause this heart was made just for you Now I can only pray Do you think about me, When you're trying to sleep Do you pray the Lord each night My heart you'll keep Do we get together in your dreams Do I hold you tight If you wish upon a star I hope you get your wish tonight Good night, pleasant dreams to all! |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Beautiful lostboy...made my night. Such a pleasant wish filled with touching esteem  Jenny Lee ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Lovely wishes! Very beautiful peom, lostboy! I enjoyed this very much. ------------------ Denise |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
Hoping your wishes come true!! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Your poem was lovely, I really liked the lines...The princess from the fairytale, and fate building a bridge between your heart and mine! I liked it all it was very, very romantic and dreamy. Welcome to passions! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this very much... especially "Cause this heart was made just for you"... I know that feeling! *G* By the way.... Welcome! [This message has been edited by suthern (edited 11-24-1999).] |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
Thanks so much. Your comments and welcomes mean a lot. There's nothing like a little romance when you feel the mood, eh? |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
AAhhhh....If I'm dreaming, don't wake me. This piece is so warm and magical - - very very nice. Gave me a bad case of the "warm fuzzies"....  Am so glad I stumbled onto it!!------------------ ~~ Lift your head high - spread your "words" and fly - - poetFemmeFatale |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
I can understand your feelings. Take heart, I thought the same exact thing of a guy in my church. My dreams came true. :-) |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
In the words of Joni Mitchell: "Love can be so sweet." Lovely and innocent, Lostboy! Corinne |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
Thank you Corrine, that was very nice of you to say |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lostboy, I don't think your lost You've surely said your say. And if she reads this poem You're surely on your way. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! A lovely poem full of sweet romance.... |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This was a wonderful poem about your heartfelt truth!! Lovely piece!! Keep it up...hope to see more!! Bridgette ------------------ "It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart." |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
Thanks poet d, sy and bleu. It certainly does feel like family, thanks for the open arms!! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Romance surely sets the mood! This poem would be most womens dream, to have such lovely expressions of words written about them! I pray at night also! I will pray for you to find the woman of your fairytale! |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
ahhh, this Is so Romantic...with such beautiful sentiments... lostboy this is a Wonderful piece....(sigh)... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Beautiful! |
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