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Iloveit
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since 1999-09-02
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NM

0 posted 1999-11-23 03:15 PM


oh the love of lust and
the lust of love.
It does seem severely
over-rated to me,
she says with all sincerity,
and a smile curling her lips.
An infatuation here,
a new spark there
the land of cyber is rich
with variety for
all your shopping needs.
One to make you feel
special,
one to make you go mmmmm,
one who likes you
just the way you are
one who makes you aspire
to be better
one to make you strong
and one who can properly bring you to your knees,
and oh watch out,
in the games that you play,
for the special one
that your heart fishes for
might just be the one
to
get
away.


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©1999 Iloveit


© Copyright 1999 Iloveit - All Rights Reserved
RSEvans
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Tulsa, OK, USA
1 posted 1999-11-23 03:19 PM


iloveit: Are you asking me out? I love this one. So full of truth, there are so many things to get into and only a few you don't wish to get back out of.

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Once I was brilliant, now I no longer shine, but the twinkle in my eye speaks of another time.

Iloveit
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2 posted 1999-11-23 03:33 PM


maybe....lol loved your reply, equally as true
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3 posted 1999-11-23 03:45 PM


I obviously need new bait. *G* Then maybe I wouldn't have to stand and wave bye-bye as the one who fulfills my entire wish list runs away as fast as possible! LOL

Great poem, Lovey!

Iloveit
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4 posted 1999-11-23 04:49 PM


ROFG@bait.....sheesh girl you've been waiving worms at em, no wonder he's a runnin'

thanks

JTF
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since 1999-08-09
Posts 319
France
5 posted 1999-11-24 04:33 AM


Ok, I have noticed there are six "one" listed in your poem Lovey ... Which one am I ? ... LOL ... Nice poem ... HUGS
tulip
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unknown
6 posted 1999-11-29 08:42 PM


I love it!
Ohme
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Texas
7 posted 1999-11-29 09:44 PM


Gonna just sit here and enjoy it for a while.


Balladeer
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8 posted 1999-11-29 11:27 PM


If there's still room in your shopping cart, I'm on the top shelf...and I'm on sale!

Another good one, lovey.

Nan
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9 posted 1999-11-30 07:17 AM


This is wonderful, iloveit - and when you do find one who's got it all in one package - embrace it and cherish it - lest the greatest love of all time elude you.....
RainbowGirl
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10 posted 1999-11-30 07:20 AM


Iloveit: I could have sworn I answered this...must be getting senile..*g*...Great thoughts..

HUSG

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There are two ways of spreading light: to be the candle, or the mirror that reflects it...

Iloveit
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11 posted 1999-12-01 02:27 PM


thanks all

ROFG@senile ...missing you hugs

JTF....hmmmmm???? I said this poem was about me????? lolol....and you are not on the list my friend, I only listed the possibllities in lovers lol, not really great friends

and ummmm Balladeer..on sale?...I never was one to resist a bargain

[This message has been edited by Iloveit (edited 12-01-1999).]

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