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Iloveit
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since 1999-09-02
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0 posted 1999-11-23 10:27 AM


but for the cries in the night
and the God that hears the love
over the pain
borne from the womb
of a mother, too young
to know that her mistakes
also cost
you dearly.

But for the angels in the night
that he sent and the spirits
that watch over the souls
that ache to be free
before its time for them to be;
but for the love that is
stronger than those that sought
to take you
when you
angrily threw away
the desire to live,
I would have lost you tonight.

But for your finally sleeping form
in the bed where you lay
fitfully fighting
the madness that almost
overtook you,
I would wish that I had dreamed
this nightmare...

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©1999 Iloveit



[This message has been edited by Iloveit (edited 11-23-1999).]

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WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
1 posted 1999-11-23 10:31 AM


Oh this is emotional! This is true? I'm sorry, but God watches over them! You'll all come through!
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 1999-11-23 10:41 AM


This one grabs your heart and doesn't let go
Iloveit
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3 posted 1999-11-23 11:18 AM


Whtdove, yes and thank you, that's what keeps me going

thanks hoot, I know, my heart too

suthern
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4 posted 1999-11-23 11:20 AM


Wow, Lovey... It doesn't just grab your heart, it breaks it!
JTF
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since 1999-08-09
Posts 319
France
5 posted 1999-11-23 11:26 AM


... I add my prayers to yours Lovey ... BIG HUGS
WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
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6 posted 1999-11-23 11:36 AM


Oooh, then I would surely keep you in my prayers!!! Looks like we both have something to be thankful for this holiday! Our kids have overcome! Thank God! Hope things look up for you and your wee one?
Iloveit
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since 1999-09-02
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7 posted 1999-11-23 11:42 AM


thanks suthern and JFT, you know your prayers and hugs mean much to me

whtdove, he is not wee anymore, but can certainly use your prayers....thanks... a lot

HugsTeam
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since 1999-09-08
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UK
8 posted 1999-11-23 12:32 PM


and a watchful eye and prayers from me..

HUSG

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An angel looking up

RSEvans
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since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147
Tulsa, OK, USA
9 posted 1999-11-23 12:34 PM


Hugs and sweeter dreams to brush the nightmares from your mind...Here for you.

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Once I was brilliant, now I no longer shine, but the twinkle in my eye speaks of another time.

Iloveit
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since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121
NM
10 posted 1999-11-23 12:35 PM


ahhhh hugs team, you just filled my eyes with tears....thank you sweet angel

thanks RS


[This message has been edited by Iloveit (edited 11-23-1999).]

Iloveit
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since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121
NM
11 posted 1999-11-23 06:55 PM


nite all, thanks so much for your support and prayers, will be out the rest of this week and next and will miss you all lots.....more than you will know

hugs to all and thanks

Balladeer
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12 posted 1999-11-23 10:53 PM


You will also be missed, lovey. My prayers go with you.
Nan
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since 1999-05-20
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Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
13 posted 1999-11-28 08:32 AM


I missed this one the first time around - It's just so poignant and certainly relevant to a parent's plight - Let's go another round.. Nicely written, iloveit...
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