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Impressions |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Impressions Sun-drenched blondes in black and skin tight dresses tan and blue-eyed babies on arms and shoulders bare and bellies ring as gypsy skirts sway to street guitar the black blues sound of a smile where an ancient couple barely able to walk hold each other and dance with the grace of youth and love is in the way his hand presses her back ice-cream with fresh fish and seaweed and lots of suntan lotion- the sun must set in this ocean even when I’m gone. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very lovely, Martie! Sounds like a great day! ------------------ Denise |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Impressions indeed! Your poetry has a way of making me feel the places or emotions you describe - another beauty here. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Rich in flavor, Martie. |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
I think I'll live here for a while!  ------------------ Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more? |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Your imagery in this one is fantastic my friend |
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