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vandana
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since 1999-10-22
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0 posted 1999-11-21 06:37 PM


I feel so fine,
When you say you're mine forever,
I feel so good inside,
My heart is in love,
Don't know what heart'll do
Without your love,
I just sit here and wonder how many times
You've held me in your arms,
I feel so fine,
When you say you're mine forever,
You're ready to give your heart,
You're ready to live with me,
Don't know what makes me feel for you,
But I realize you're mine forever,

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poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646
Arkansas
1 posted 1999-11-22 01:14 AM


Ah how nice it is to be in love! You expressed it so beautifully, it makes the whole idea of "love" sound so much nicer! hehe I tend to be more skeptical, but hey, you sound like you know where your heart is! Thanks for sharing, and Welcome!

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~~ Lift your head high - spread your "words" and fly - - poetFemmeFatale


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