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Richard 33
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since 1999-09-09
Posts 187
glen easton, wv usa

0 posted 1999-11-21 12:38 PM


This poem comes with a disclaimer, and is in
no way meant to defeign anyone's character,
or likeness thereof!!


One summer's day in "75" you arrived into
this world, so innocent, of others conception.

You had no way of knowing, of a havoc you
would somday reek!

On a cold january's night, we would meet
not knowing of the tragedy, I would Greet.

you endeared me with divine words, seduced me
with your (line).

What anger that was hidden behind beautiful
blue eyes, it was all nothing short of lies.

Fell in love with an image, I would not misuse, It was me you would soon abuse!!!

Life with you became a war zone, you with
your sarcastic, agressive tone.

The physical pain I could handle, It was the
way you made me feel, that I couldn't.

Calling me a fat slob, just because I was disabled, and was unable to get a job.


IT WAS WHAT YOU DID TO MY FAMILY THAT IS
INEXCUSABLE, THE LIVES YOU TORTURED, AND
DAMAGED, SOMEHOW WE HAVE MANAGED, QUITE WELL
WITHOUT YOU INDEED!!!!!!!!!!!

There is no sorrow, I feel for you, no remorse in letting you go, I care not.


Richard allen Baker

[This message has been edited by Richard 33 (edited 11-21-1999).]

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Julie
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since 1999-08-20
Posts 739
Houston, TX
1 posted 1999-11-21 12:46 PM


Wow Richard, sometimes getting all that out helps. I hope your life is better now.
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores
2 posted 1999-11-21 08:31 AM


Richard33- Hope the anger has left with the penning of the thoughts.
Letting go is the final step toward moving on.
The best to you in your forward venture.


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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Richard 33
Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 187
glen easton, wv usa
3 posted 1999-11-21 10:12 AM


Actually we have been divorced for 15 months.
It's not so much anger, as it is cleasing
of the soul, disgarding old loose feelings!!

thanx to ya boath for your replies!!!!

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
4 posted 1999-11-21 11:07 AM


WOW....this one is a bit strong. Can certainly see the anger pouting forth in it.
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