Open Poetry #4 |
I Knew You Well |
Erynn Griffin Junior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 27San Angelo, TX United States |
I knew your dreams Because we used to talk For hours at a time. I knew your friendship Because you were always there When I needed your comfort. I knew your pain Because you trusted me enough To share your past with me I knew your fears Because you helped me To see that mine were the same. I knew what was important to you Because you were always So honest with me. I knew your goals Because I felt the enthusiasm In your words when you spoke of them. I knew your guidance Because you patiently explained The things I didn't understand I knew your heart Because I saw right into it And felt it as part of my own. For Cory Estes |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
I like this very much. Verse five says volumes to me. It's so important to have true honesty Jenny Lee ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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Erynn Griffin Junior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 27San Angelo, TX United States |
Thank you for your support Jenny I hope to hear form you again <3 Erynn |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Welcome to passions Erynn |
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