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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 1999-11-10 06:50 AM


The fire of desire
burning bright,
casts a glow
throughout the night.

The dying embers
glowing within,
jumping to life
when touched by the wind.

Our love is stirred
to a new height,
by the breath of the wind
blowing softly this night.

The morning comes,
the fire is at it's end.
Nothing left but the ashes ...
blowing in the wind.

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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Watcher666
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1 posted 1999-11-10 06:56 AM


Liked this much!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Jackie
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2 posted 1999-11-10 11:19 AM


I liked it ..very nicely done..
hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 1999-11-10 12:13 PM


Very well stated in very few words. Nicely done
Mike
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4 posted 1999-11-11 09:22 AM


Nice.
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