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i need help........ |
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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
people are dying but i need help the world is devouring itself but i cant save myself oceans go flat but im oblivious to that mountains sink lower till becoming dirt but i dont become the only one hurt everythings falling away today but if i just close my eyes to the my lonely insides maybe it would all go away.. and leave this another victory for shattered pride ------------------ |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Hey, I can erally relate to this one.....sometimes I feel so guilty, being wrapped up in my petty problems, when others are dying, the world is dying....**sigh** ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Yeah, I'll get worked up over a bad day, but never stop to think of all the people in this world who have bad days every day, because of things they can't even control. And hungar, disease, war? But even so, don't we all at some point forget the world and think of ourselves? It's not good, but don't we? |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wow Jackal, this one is truly packed with emotions  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very well written, Jackal. So much emotion in so few words. ------------------ Denise |
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