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my love |
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brilio New Member
since 1999-11-18
Posts 2stevens point, wi, usa |
Oh so full is how you make me feel Find me smiling as I think of you Even when youre gone I cant forget The little things that make me love you And I love you so completely And I love you so purely I find myself not afraid to share My innermost secrets The face behind societys mask An emptiness inside me filled Cant be with you enough With you I find strength when Im weak In you I find strength from me Together we grow Smart, strong, wise, caring, loved And Ive been asked "dont you want more?" And Ive been asked "dont you get bored?" And Ive said "no, I have all I need." And Ive said "no, I have a lot of fun." What we have, just you and me Just you and me, ordinary kids Brought together by that dance In our world of cool moons and endless love We wander comforted by one another At night we snuggle beneath diamond stars I fall asleep staring into the heavens of your eyes As the magenta of the days new dawn appears We awake, together in spirit, to watch the sun The world reborn, as we start our lives anew Holding hands, walking slow, the only way we know Meeting loveless souls so lonely in the world We try to help, to no avail So many are much to restless and greedy And that brings us closer in a world of chaos While everything else falls apart I know youre there for me to depend on And we sit in the fresh sparkling water Content to float down todays river for life And a flood is coming, with the way we live So much to live for, You And we learn to survive with our kind Laugh off their timeless mistakes Once again history repeats itself Once again love is unscathed by the fight So together were drawn, as deemed by fate No longer to fear the emptiness of alone Upon us watchlights fade As we journey through life Never to lament the days useless past [This message has been edited by brilio (edited 11-19-1999).] |
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Miss Abagail Mannering Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 136byron, il |
i LOVE this....i wish i had written it...i can totally relate to it. |
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Lynn Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 316Jasper, Alabama U.S.A. |
brilio...your words are so sweet. This was a most excellent piece of work. Beautiful poem. ------------------ If time cannot heal your pain, you can always cry on my shoulder. ~Jenn~ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Great loving sentiments! ------------------ Denise |
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