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Reverting To Roosevelt
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LRAW Junior Member
since 1999-11-06
Posts 15 |
Reverting To Roosevelt It is a risk, or so they say To love a girl Born twelve years this day Her body untouched and her spirit so bright to hold in my arms brings peace through the night I know it's a sin I'm ten years her senior but life is not living when I am not near her To me, dear friends the end's not her shout but to take her to Cuba where out love will lack doubt The question is now do I steal her away or remain just her cousin and visit on holiday's |
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LRAW Junior Member
since 1999-11-06
Posts 15 |
There is a typing error in it, it should be in the second fourth stanza, the last line it should say "Where our love will lack doubt" not "Where out love will lack doubt" Sorry |
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LRAW Junior Member
since 1999-11-06
Posts 15 |
Sorry there is a typing error in the reply i made. Here is the real error in the poem. The fourth stanza, last line, It should read :"Where our love will lack doubt" not "where out love will lack doubt" Sorry once again |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Interesting.Well written ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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