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Lolita
Junior Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 44
Buffalo, NY, America

0 posted 1999-11-18 06:40 AM


dead in the street
dying in heat
waiting for the sun
waiting for the gun
smile girl,
my world
hoping for release
hoping for some peace
screaming, crying
waiting, dying
dead on her feet
she is dead in the street
she's alive in my mind
but she's dead

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Miss Abagail Mannering
Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 136
byron, il
1 posted 1999-11-19 03:21 PM


chilling.....believable...this reminds me of a poem a friend of mine once wrote.

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"Some people aren't worth a puddle of ant pee in the middle of a dessert when it's 100 degrees in the shade." -me

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