A few haiku (at least I think they are -- LOL)

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Open Poetry #4

A few haiku (at least I think they are -- LOL)

Skyfyre
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since 1999-08-15

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Sitting in Michael's Lap

0 posted 1999-11-17 09:26 PM

Owl watching, silent,
His slow blink deliberate,
Eclipsing twin moons.

Escaping grey skies,
Fingers tap at the window:
The rain comes calling.

Quicksilver serpent,
Scales glinting as they ripple:
Moon on the river.

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You cannot choose the way of your death, but the path you choose will determine its own end.

Systematic Decay
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since 1999-09-15

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That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

1 posted 1999-11-17 09:51 PM

Wow....these are really wonderful! Perfectly done...I would tell you my favorite....but thet are all great!

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

2 posted 1999-11-17 09:54 PM

Indeed they are....and good ones too

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Alis volat propriis
(She flies with her own wings)

Skyfyre
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since 1999-08-15

Posts 1906
Sitting in Michael's Lap

3 posted 1999-11-17 11:47 PM

Thank you both -- I must say, these are fun!

--Kess

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