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My fingers hurt with aching
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My fingers hurt with aching |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom 
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You're in my mind I'm hungry for your love I will devour all I can my heart cries as it accepts your hug How can a love that's shared between you and I be wrong I convince myself that only I can feel it now but I know that for you it's just as strong You're so resolute and keep my love at bay but my heart can't accept second best and heaven knows we both do try but here, in my mind, love won't rest My fingers hurt with aching my face drawn but my eyes full of longing talking to you each day my heart reminds me why We touched each other our hearts,bodies and mind once synchronised you and me, yours and mine How can love be so right yet cause this much pain but without you in my life happiness would be in vain.... ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. [This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 11-17-1999).] |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Been there... felt that. You said it well... that fine line between joy and pain is often drawn by love. |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
"My face drawn but my eyes full of longing" A brilliant line ... it paints a vivid picture. This speaks much of truth. Nocht ------------------ "Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus" Now as I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die." |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
big hugs and deep sighs....beautiful poem  |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Wow, RG, this is beautiful....I certainly know the feeling... ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very touching and heartfelt, Rainbow. Well done. ------------------ Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Well done RG ------------------ Alis volat propriis (She flies with her own wings) |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
I have understood this feeling RG - I hope you find some relief one day. Hugs to you. K |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
RG, Well done enjoyed the read. All things come in time. That is if you have the time? |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Very sad words, Rainbow. When your fingers hurt with aching, that's bad. When they ache with hurting, then you really got a problem! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I can definitely relate to this one right now RG! HUGS to ya! |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Andrew: I agree.. HUGS Nocht: Thank you.. HUGS Iloveit: Just as well we don't live closer to each other or we'd be running out of tea.. HUSG SD: I think many do, but I guess you can't have one without the other.. HUGS Denise: Thank you.. and congratulations.. HUGS Hoot: Bless you.. HUGS Severn: I know what would bring relief but I can dream.. HUGS Seymour: I always have the time, but what did you mean?.. HUGS Bal: I had to read that twice..LOL, but yep, right as usual..  HUSG WhtDove: Then here's some extra long hugs back.. HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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