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Sailing Away
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Sailing Away |
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Emmy Member
since 1999-06-29
Posts 194KY |
Upon my boat, barely afloat adrift in raging seas Seasick with sin and hate within driven by misery The blowing gales that fill my sails are winds of desperation Trying to get away from life today and corruption of creation At the birth of mother earth it all began quite well But to our dismay each passing day brought us closer to hell So now I fight with all my might against these frenzied seas To see just if there still exists Blessed serenity [This message has been edited by Emmy (edited 11-11-1999).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is very nicely done, Emmy. I enjoyed reading this. ------------------ Denise |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I love this Emmy. Good job. michael |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
Clever way of writing this. As I read, I envisioned a pirate looking character reciting this. Ok..so, I'm rather odd..and I know you're a girl..LOL Oh well, no one's perfect! |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Liked this much! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Emmy Member
since 1999-06-29
Posts 194KY |
Well, I'm sure I could be something akin to Long Jane Silver or whatever... close enough, close enough  |
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