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Open Poetry #4

Make me feel alive...

The Jackal
Member

since 1999-08-13

Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 1999-11-15 02:11 PM

if it makes me feel alive
isnt that good
worth losing pride..
some say i paint the picture
too real
but im honest
i no longer feel
you say you want to connect with me
like i exist
in your sanctuary
you say you want to know what i think..
its not pretty a picture
not pretty a thought
but ill be honest to you
i owe you that much
if you can stand that sight
ill drop the pen
and never write again..

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hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

1 posted 1999-11-15 09:12 PM

Poetry is such a release for you, I think you should never drop the pen

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 1999-11-15 09:17 PM

I like this very much, Jackal. But don't ever drop your pen!

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Denise

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