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DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

0 posted 1999-11-14 09:41 PM

Eloquent speech is not up to the task,
therefore I turn to my pen's written word.
Passionate devotion lies behind this mask,
an honor to she on whom it's conferred.

To plumb the depths of emotion she stirred,
I turn to the comfort found in one voice.
Love my experience should have deterred,
instead I embraced it by my own choice.

Not once since the philosophies of Royce,
has anyone's words but hers moved my soul.
Enveloped by love's embrace I rejoice,
for I have found the half that makes me whole.

Her fires ignite my own heart's tinder,
it burns until the sun is a cinder.

©1999 DreamEvil

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Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

1 posted 1999-11-14 09:47 PM

Beautiful! It flowed very well, I love it!

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.

Julie Jordan Scott
Member

since 1999-09-19

Posts 146
Bakersfield, CA USA

2 posted 1999-11-14 10:44 PM

flowing, loving, beautifully stated tribute......

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Julie Jordan Scott is a Freelance Writer and Public Speaker,
but her favorite role is that of Mommy! Visit her website at
http://www.5passions.com

Skyfyre
Senior Member

since 1999-08-15

Posts 1906
Sitting in Michael's Lap

3 posted 1999-11-14 10:45 PM

This brought a smile to my face, albeit an envious one. I should hope to be so blessed someday with the depth of love the two of you have found in each other.

--Kess

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You cannot choose the way of your death, but the path you choose will determine its own end.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 1999-11-14 10:47 PM

DE,
You have a talent for writing and use it well.

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

5 posted 1999-11-14 10:59 PM

That love is showing again! Wonderful Scott!

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

6 posted 1999-11-15 09:19 AM

Nicely written Scott

Iloveit
Senior Member

since 1999-09-02

Posts 1121
NM

7 posted 1999-11-15 01:20 PM

very very nice, sigh, a tribute to her and you

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 1999-11-15 01:51 PM

I like it when you choose to tug at heartstrings...well done, good Sir.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

9 posted 1999-11-15 02:06 PM

The heart has written such beautiful tribute here to the one you love.

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

10 posted 1999-11-15 04:59 PM

Simply beautiful my friend.
I really mean it - this made me want to cry.

K

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