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vandana
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since 1999-10-22
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0 posted 1999-11-14 07:14 PM


Give the best to the world you have,
And the rest will come to you,
Let me ,but love my love,
Without disguise,
Love with out heart,
That tears us into pieces,
Love without world we care,
I would give anuthing to you,
But the world with love cares for us,
So that's why love makes the world go around,
So that's why love makes the world go round,
Yet the light of the bright world dies,
With the dying sun,
The heart is on the light of the whole life,
dies when love is done,

© Copyright 1999 vandana - All Rights Reserved
Miss Abagail Mannering
Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 136
byron, il
1 posted 1999-11-19 03:29 PM


i love your work...i don't understand why more people don't respond to it..keep it up though! :>

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