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vandana
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since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463
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0 posted 1999-11-13 11:28 AM


Candle night,
The touch of your sweet loving hand,
Your hand is in mine,
I feel fine,
When you say love me,
Don't stop loving me,
Tour sweet smile makes me crazy,
You took my heart and soul,
When you look at my eyes,
I feel so much love,
I'm in love,
I never been in love before,
Candle night ,
The stars are so bright,
You smile when I say I love you,
Don't stop loving me,
Don't let me stop loving you,
Candle night,
Kisses are so sweet,
I wonder how many times,
You've held me tight,
Are you in love with me?
I ask this question myself,
When I look at your eyes,
The sun rose in your eyes,
Your eyes shines like a star in the night,
I wonder Gog has given you to love me,
I thank him so ,
Don't stop loving me,


© Copyright 1999 vandana - All Rights Reserved
Miss Abagail Mannering
Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 136
byron, il
1 posted 1999-11-18 11:14 PM


keep up the good work, i like your style

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Justbleu
Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
2 posted 1999-12-03 11:40 AM


I agree....keep it up!!

Bridgette

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"It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart."

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