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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704
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Caught on a pinnacle a ledge of cruel self doubt ...you... question a blind uncaring sky while watching its reflection in deep water for you feel unworthy to raise your eyes ...I... poet-speak live and run to the edge of life lay the past in its garden buried forget and learn and forgive ...yourself... Mirrored and echoed we two once yet now a new time ...I... make it safe my friend Come. *For C* 26.12.99 [This message has been edited by Severn (edited 12-25-1999).] |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
in which I used to fly where now holds only what? dreams hopes love hope no... still doubt yet doubt is not the end need not breed despair nor lead away from friendship from the guiding hand which cares and holds I come [This message has been edited by Christopher (edited 12-25-1999).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
These are both beautiful, you two! So lovely! Denise |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Beautiful, Severn.........on my way! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
In your caring you have made a safe place--beautiful poem-beautiful you. In the dew of little things, the heart finds its morning and is refreshed. (ee cummings) |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Christopher steered me not wrong when recommending I read this piece. 'Tis lovely work my friend. Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© ------------------------------------------------------- "Either kill me or take me as I am, because I'll be damned if I ever change..." Count Donatien Alphonse Francois de Sade (Marquis de Sade) |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Her words are her essence, the wing of butterfly, and his, the wind to float across the wing. Liz [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 12-26-1999).] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Geesh - You make it pretty hard not to appreciate free verse....  |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Yes indeed.....Beautiful Severn! A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Severn, this was absolutely beautiful my friend. Your kind and caring nature rings clear in it. You have created a safe haven with your caring heart, it would be a fool who would not come to that safety. Christopher...wonderful response my friend. We can't look back, the past is over and done with....but, we can dream of a future to be...look ahead where your future lays and don't waste time looking back |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is so very beautiful!! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
My, what beautiful things I miss when I'm away. I'm very glad to have found this today. It is breathtaking,as is the response...and portrays the beauty of two hearts for whom friendship patiently waits. Do not hesitate to accept the invitation.  It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Beautiful Indeed Severn Reach inside your heart, that is the greatest gift you can bestow. Merry Christmas.. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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mirjam Member
since 1999-11-24
Posts 246Auckland, New Zealand |
Wow Severn they're so right about your heart - it's huge!!! Both poems were beautiful and capture a friendship that has survived it's ups and downs, and will be sturdier because of it. Great stuff!!! |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Chris Even a wingtip from the ground you fly just trust yourself. Denise - thankyou my friend. Michael - welcome any time. Martie  thankyou.Scott - much appreciation dark one. Liz - beautiful words dear friend. Nan - of course, I'm out for converts you know! Thankyou! Pepper - smile! Ruth - I appreciate that - thankyou. DA - thankyou - talk to you soon. Caroline - thankyou - it isn't easy, my friend. Isis - thanks! Mirjam - dear friend, what you say is wonderful...(and she loves the book!) |
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