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RobertB
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0 posted 1999-12-24 10:06 PM


Book of a Life


In it's pages, writings
of triumphs and falls..
words uttered and phrases learned
measured by growth
not so much in inches
but in love
of a mother preoccupied in life
and sibling's achievements
shadowed by work
that never ended
until the day
the last page was to be finished-
authored with a quill
plunged in a well of his mother's tears


Robert

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 1999-12-25 12:19 PM


Robert -
This is just wonderful.
I really like the thought of
'authored with a quill
plunged in a well of his mother's tears'
Wow ... says so much.
Exquisite.
~*Marge*~



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WhtDove
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2 posted 1999-12-25 01:06 AM


In order for me to show you just what words I liked the most, I would have to quote the entire thing!  I loved it Robert!  It touched me. Merry Christmas buddy, and I miss talking with ya!

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Jesus is the reason for the season
Keep Christ in CHRISTmas


RobertB
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3 posted 1999-12-25 09:46 AM


Thanks you guys. I cannot remember exactly who inspired this poem. Strange...I have several friends who have lost children in death. Have a great weekend with your families!!

 if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

Elizabeth Santos
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4 posted 1999-12-25 09:50 AM


Robert,
So many hearts could call this poem their own. How truly beautiful it is!
Liz

RobertB
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5 posted 1999-12-25 10:19 AM


I just remembered where the inspiration came from for this poem..

My father died at age 32 from lung cancer. A few years ago after the death of his father, my aunt gave me some of my dad's things. In them was a baby book started by my grandma. It told of all his acheivements.....on the last page it told of his death.

Pepper
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6 posted 1999-12-25 10:34 AM


From a mother who's tears still fall...I thank you for sharing this most moving piece....

RobertB
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7 posted 1999-12-25 10:37 AM


I am so sorry Pepper.....it is so wrong for a parent to outlive their child
Denise
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8 posted 1999-12-25 12:20 PM


Sadly touching, Robert. Thanks for sharing.

 Denise



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9 posted 1999-12-25 02:40 PM


It is terrible for that to happen, but you have expressed the fact that it does beautifully.

 Nail to the mast her holy flag,
Set every threadbare sail-
And give her to the god of storms,
The lightning and the gale!
-Oliver Wendell Holmes



RobertB
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10 posted 1999-12-25 03:12 PM


Thanks again....Denise....thank you very much
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11 posted 2005-04-15 03:28 AM


well, here I am in the archives again Robert

yaknow, this one tugs the heart strings m'friend

glad I came across it

Artic Wind
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12 posted 2007-11-12 04:17 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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