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samsonheart
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since 1999-12-20
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Missouri rez.

0 posted 1999-12-24 02:32 AM


stay
sprinkled canvas of black ‘neath which we lie
stay tomorrow
and tomorrow do not say goodbye
stay longer
let me breathe the aroma that gets me high
stay forever
with dirty wings from murky past we will shake these beaten feathers and fly
say something
say anything to me
do not glance my way with piercing eyes and not expect me to yearn for a deeper look
wet your lips the way you do and expect nothing less of me, a devouring of your kiss
I have said many things to you which matter not
The words I long to speak.....trickle with cowardice back into my lungs
“I need you......
so stay.”

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WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
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1 posted 1999-12-24 03:28 AM


Alright, I'm stayin! hehe sorry, couldn't resist. Convincing it is!

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Jesus is the reason for the season
Keep Christ in CHRISTmas


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2 posted 1999-12-24 09:09 AM


Samsonheart -
You 'rambled' with sure direction.
Sounds like you need to admit
the need to emit those words.
No better time than now, huh?
~*Marge*~

 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA
3 posted 1999-12-24 10:25 AM


I really like this, I like the feelings it envokes  
samsonheart
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since 1999-12-20
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Missouri rez.
4 posted 1999-12-24 12:36 PM


Thank you for your replies, everyone.  I just felt a tinge of loneliness last night and wrote that one up real quick.  I wish I still had the chance to say those words to her, but she's already gone. Livin' in Arizona.

samsonheart

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