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Open Poetry #4

The greatest gift of all

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

0 posted 1999-12-23 04:40 PM

I wrote four poems about Christmas and out of the four, I thought that this was the best one. I hope y'll like it.

For Christmas, I got a gold necklace
and rolex watch for my wrists.
I also got an Armani navy-blue suit
and a new pair of black-suede shoes.
But despite all the wonderful gifts I've recieved,
I still remembered to get down on my knees,
and thank the Lord for making this all possible for me.
I love you Lord with all my might.
Your grace and your love is truly out of sight.
So when it comes to materialistic things, I'm not so apalled
because, life provided by my saviour God,
is the greatest gift of all.

Nathan

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

1 posted 1999-12-23 05:38 PM

Merry Christmas to my poetry society!

Nathan

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 1999-12-23 08:42 PM

Merry Christmas to you too, Nate! God bless you! Lovely poem!

Denise

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

3 posted 1999-12-24 09:11 AM

Thank you dsnyder and Merry Christmas to you too!

Nathan

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

4 posted 1999-12-24 10:22 AM

Merry Christmas

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

5 posted 1999-12-24 11:00 AM

Merry Christmas to you too hoot_owl_rn!

Nathan

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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6 posted 2004-05-10 07:48 AM

good write!

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