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amber Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 240los banos, ca, 
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“Angel” An angel fell before me, On wings made of glass, She told me that she's happy, That I've found true love at last. Her eyes were soft like velvet, Colored vibrant blue, She whispered no matter how hard it gets, To never stop loving you. Her hands were like pure ivory, And the warmest glow arose, From every breath that escaped her, Every question came to close. She said our love is eternal, And to never give you up, Even when it all seems lost, Your love will be enough. Her time was running short, As she faded from my view, Her words I'll hold forever, "He'll never stop loving you." I tell myself it must be real, Not knowing if I'm right, Because it felt like a dream, That swept across my life. Telling me in reality, All that my heart knows, There's no ending to our story, No death to this love's rose. But a book that's read forever, Through each other’s eyes, And the angel’s grace that told me, To us ~forever~ should come as no surprise. |
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Kevin Taylor Member
since 1999-12-23
Posts 185near Vancouver, BC, Canada |
"And the angel’s grace that told me, To us ~forever~ should come as no surprise" These two lines marry beauty and truth so well. So well. Kevin "With oar on gunwale sounding role the village fishers flocked to sea" |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
This piece stopped me in my tracks. 'Tis very well done and worded. It likes me much. Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© ------------------------------------------------------- "Either kill me or take me as I am, because I'll be damned if I ever change..." Count Donatien Alphonse Francois de Sade (Marquis de Sade) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
This is beautiful. . . the words seem to flow so freely. . . so effortlessly. . . you have really found the speech of the angels. . . wonderful my friend. . . That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
This Angel came to touch your heart and make it forever strong. The beauty of your words alone show how much love you already feel. This Angel will always be near guiding you as you reach for your everlasting love. May the beauty of the season shine through your eyes and illuminate every step you take. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This was a pleasure to read. Very beautiful, indeed Liz |
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littleJas Junior Member
since 1999-12-22
Posts 39Australia |
What a beautiful poem , I can feel the love you convey in the words you've chosen . I really like it. Jas |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Great expression of emotions...i liked the use of an angel too..makes the love seem real...i like this one amber...   Starboards "I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget" |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Yes, a very beautiful piece Amber... Loved the read! A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
amber, The message was like christmas cheer It came across nice and clear. Beautiful poem |
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amber Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 240los banos, ca, |
thank you all so much for your comments, i have missed you all so much, glad to be back after so long. thanks agian! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Amber! I loved it! Denise |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I, too, am happy for you, Amber! Elizabeth Nail to the mast her holy flag, Set every threadbare sail- And give her to the god of storms, The lightning and the gale! -Oliver Wendell Holmes |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
I will give it to you straight.......This was wonderful Thank youShare what you are for you are what you share |
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Jim Hastings Junior Member
since 1999-12-22
Posts 23Arizona |
What a beautifull poem. I had to read it again. Jim |
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