Still inside of you.........

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Open Poetry #4

Still inside of you.........

The Jackal
Member

since 1999-08-13

Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 1999-12-22 11:33 PM

you leave a little message
that youve been here before
but all you do
you forget
im still inside you
you hurry to erase another memory
creating mercy
which rushes to bury me
refusing to be allowed
to be placed underground
evolving into more of a monster
than you ever thought id be...
my god..cant stop
this effect you have upon me..

starboards
Member

since 1999-10-14

Posts 467
longwood, florida

1 posted 1999-12-23 12:37 PM

I hate this feeling...that someone is still inside of you...you cant listen to songs, watch movies, go to places because it hurts too much to think about...great poem!

"I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget"

littleJas
Junior Member

since 1999-12-22

Posts 39
Australia

2 posted 1999-12-23 09:44 AM

Its a great poem, the feeling it conveys Ive felt before

Jas

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 1999-12-23 09:55 AM

Jackal -
Think we've all been there ...
and eventually buried the memories ...
only to find that at some future time
we were able to uncover them and realize
that they were not so bad after all.
Takes time ... takes it's toll.
Wishing you memories in your heart to
make you smile.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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The Jackal
Member

since 1999-08-13

Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

4 posted 1999-12-23 10:15 AM

thanks marge and thanks to everyone appreciate it very much..The Jackal

caroline
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since 1999-08-16

Posts 1218
http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm

5 posted 1999-12-23 08:01 PM

Like this, Jackal...it has a raw honesty to it that gives it power. Good job

It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-04-22 03:48 AM

sigh

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