Open Poetry #4 |
The Gods of jolly |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
The Gods of jolly Whirling twirling virtues plight, Dancing blithely in the night. Whispering touching teasing, Throwing seeds of dreaming.. Fantasies of blooming flowers, All with scented magic powers. Casting phantoms everywhere. On fire flies that light the air. Colors streaming in the dreaming Twisting, laughing in the seeming. Tossing wishes everywhere, For bride and groom walking there. Dancing on a dream of flight. Into the forever night. Holding hands into a realm, Of wonder land and overwhelm. My the gods have mercy in their jolly And not turn jolly into folly. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, My, you do have pleasant dreams Of pure delight and joy it seems So much jollier they are than mine Have you any more of the tasty wine? Great poem! I love it! Liz |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Enjoyed... liked the use of the language. |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
I sense a note of caution said Though it could be Justin Mihead |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Great poem, Sy! And yes, Dr.Moose, I agree! (wow...did I do one of those 'read between the lines' thingies?) Denise |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Well spoken Sir Sey. A fine read with an interesting twist at the end. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Liz, Oh yes my dear the celler is full and Some day I'll pull a cork with you. *L* Sy Mike, Thank you. Moose, All life is a caution. Denese, Yes you did, thank you for the read and comment. Scott, Thank you for the interesting twist comment. |
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Coegwyr Junior Member
since 1999-12-20
Posts 35 |
A lot of fine words well used (as always) Thanks for the read. |
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