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John Yaws
Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 860
Texas

0 posted 1999-12-22 12:13 PM


My love is always at my side,
A mistress cold and real.
Not of flesh and bone is she-
But blue, case-hardened steel.
A choice I made so long ago,
A lonely way of life...
She’s closer than a brother, though
A lover, or a wife....
If I were carving notches-
To ten I could lay claim...
Each one a spectre in my dreams,
Each one a person’s name.
Each one a human life cut short,
No claims, I wasn’t willin’
I never drew upon a man-
Unless he needed killin’.
Now, it seems I’m growing old
And time has slowed my hand,
One day soon I’ll end my string-
There, face down in the sand.
I’ll leave no one to dress my grave-
No one to mourn for me..
At last the old man with his scythe
Shall set a prisoner free.
The nights are long, I sing my song
Until my race is run-
My only friend, my love, my all-
A Smith&Wesson gun.

© Copyright 1999 John R. Yaws - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-12-22 12:25 PM


Thoroughly entertaining!

 Denise



Tara Simms
Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244
Honea Path, SC USA
2 posted 1999-12-22 12:32 PM


ah, the loneliness of the gunfighter's life is palpable in this.

 It matters not how strait the gate;
How charged with punishments the scroll;
I am the master of my fate:
I am the captain of my soul.
--W.E. Henley



Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

3 posted 1999-12-22 12:53 PM


I do get the sense of loneliness through this - well done!
starboards
Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida
4 posted 1999-12-22 01:07 AM


very enjoyable indeed gunslinger!  

Starboards


 
"I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget"

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