Open Poetry #4 |
A silly of nothing |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
A silly poem of nothing God I'm slow, so slow of wit, I seem to sit and sit and sit. I cannot think of what to write I've sit here close to half the night. Now only the dark prevails, There is no star to guide my sail. The wind blows and I don't know In which direction I should go. I think I'll lay me down to sleep. Perhaps in dream a start will seep. And then I'll up and write it down And wipe away this nonsense clown. It's the start of things that's hard for me, That big blank canvas that I see. But sometimes just a words impart Will make the pen to flow in start. So let me think what word above. Perhaps, perhaps I'll start with love. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
'Tis not a silly thing you write A battle fierce, this poet's plight I know the truth of what you say Alas, one word could win the day! Denise |
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Dolphins3 Member
since 1999-09-30
Posts 135Wisconsin |
Seymore, Let me be the first to say Super poem. Thanks for the smile. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Denise, I know, it just seem that way *L* Sy Dolphins3, Thank you for the super do, Before I slide to page two. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Love is always a good place to start, Sy. Not a silly piece at all. Rather enjoyed this one. michael |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Ans simply being able to write of 'nothing' is impressive in itself dear friend! LOL - I liked this - made me smile and I was quite able to identify... K |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, Nobody writes about nothing More beautifully than you And that is something for most of us That's difficult to do If this poem is really about nothing Then I can't wait to see Your little something gnomes Write lines of poetry For everything you write seems to Come right from your heart If you want to write about something Love is a good place to start Love ya, Liz |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Sy sure can write a lot about nothing.. |
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