A Werewolf song ( revised version)

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Open Poetry #4

A Werewolf song ( revised version)

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

0 posted 1999-12-21 07:29 PM

I was reading one of R.L. Stine's books and as soon as I put the book down I started writing a poem. This poem is basically about me transforming into a werewolf. Bad moonlight was the original name for this poem but I changed it to Werewolf song because, this poem felt more like a song as I typed it in the computer.

Bad moonlight, bad moonlight,
please come out for me tonight.
Bad moonlight, bad moonlight,
I'm begging you with all my might.

Please come with me!
Please stay with me!
Come out and shine youself on me,
so that I can be happy.
In the daytime, I dream about you while I sleep.
At nightime, I gleam at you while I eat.

Bad moonlight, bad moonlight
please come out for me tonight.
Bad moonlight, bad moonlight,
I'm begging you with all my might.

Oh bad moonlight, you make me cold,
while I'm in my mold.
You put hair all over my body,
making it feel rough and brisky.

You give me sharper teeth,
for better things to eat.
You make my eyes more darker and more fiercer,
as my human qualities grow scarcer.

You add two more legs to make me four,
which makes me twice as faster than before.
I'm a human's worst nightmare
because, one look at me spells fear.

I chase down my prey in hungry pursuit of their blood.
It's something that I can't get enough of.
None of this would be possible without my bad moonlight
so, I thank you bad moonlight for giving me life, in the time of night.

Nathan

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

1 posted 1999-12-21 07:34 PM

Nathan,
I have always hated stories about werewolfs
But I like your poem. Excellent!
Liz

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

2 posted 1999-12-21 08:08 PM

Thank you Liz, I'm glad you liked it!

Nathan

sandgrain
Member Elite

since 1999-09-21

Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA

3 posted 1999-12-21 09:18 PM

Very scarey! If this makes any sense, I dislike the topic but it's written so melodic, it ought to be sung.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

4 posted 1999-12-21 11:06 PM

I enjoyed this Nate! This could be a song! Very scarey, though!

Denise

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

5 posted 1999-12-22 05:28 PM

Thank you for the wonderful comments.

Nathan

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