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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Girl you were my best friend. I wondered how our love could end. You were special to me. You helped me see, life like it should be. I don't feel so well because, my heart hurts like hell. Baby, tell me why you walked away from me because without you home, I am forced to go through life alone. Tell me what I should do know because living without your love, I don't know how, I don't know how, I really don't know how. Please come back now because, I can't eat or sleep. All I do is weep because, life without you, gives me the sad blues. Nathan |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I think this would fit nicely into the Open #4 forum. I am moving this one there Nate. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very sad, Nate. Well done. Denise |
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myslinky Junior Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 27 |
Thankyou for sharing your feelings in this great poem.  |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Nathan - this is heartwrenching. Hugs. |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Thank you all for comments! And thanks Whtdove for moving my poem. Nathan |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ouch  |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Ouch indeed passing shawdows said ARCTIC WIND |
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