Open Poetry #4 |
unconscious |
mc Member
since 1999-11-16
Posts 67México |
Many nights at ease bring the joy of dreams that somehow have deceit the importance in believes I dream of you (or more likely I bring you into them) to capture the essence of once upon to rest you in my glorious tomb So, yes I've come insane but delirious in an armonic state where there's an empty shake starting to tremble in grace How can anyone blame me for the things I do or the things not knowing I don't do for there's so much at hand than just to go and grab. Go on and dream away come near or get away while there's some reason beneath my veins While light and day are fresh and out!! mcestrada |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
I liked the way that you worded this poem...shows lots of emotion...great job! Starboards "I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget" |
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mc Member
since 1999-11-16
Posts 67México |
Thanks Star, I sure enjoyed writing this one as my fingers ran through the computer not exactly knowing what they wrote... mcestrada |
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samsonheart Member
since 1999-12-20
Posts 72Missouri rez. |
mc, i thought this was an excellent piece. you have a wonderful gift. samsonheart |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Mari, this is beautiful. Very unusual and delicate. I like it much! Hugs, K. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
This is an interesting piece of poetry, much deeper than it appears |
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mc Member
since 1999-11-16
Posts 67México |
Thanks for your kind words you all!! I really appreciate it!!! mcestrada |
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