Open Poetry #4 |
flying on silvery moonbeams.. |
RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
For some time now she's been here laughing time spent really well the spark of hope's returning a story she hopes he'll one day tell Lending a shoulder to cry on giving hugs when he was sad now he's learnt what's precious under his nose was what he had She shared his joy and his fun and saw his chin stayed high now his once half empty heart echoes a more peaceful sigh This angel's work is done as she backs away with pride but has a longing feeling tucked way down deep inside For angel's rules are very clear you give your best then fly if angel's get their hearts involved you'll hear an angel cry Angel's live inside your head the magic of all our dreams sharing hugs and gifts of love flying on silvery moonbeams.. Watch closely... Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream... |
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Nan
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Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This is very good advice, indeed - I'm watching closely... .... Nice work, RG..... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RainbowGirl - So light, feathery and beautiful. Loved the thoughts ... especially - 'if angel's get their hearts involved you'll hear an angel cry' LOVELY - LOVELY - LOVELY Your heart is in tune with your pen. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
RainbowGirl.....you're like a rainbow, beautiful, colourful and always a pleasure to "see" what you wrote. Beautiful ! : ) Merry Christmas to you ! Hugs, Munda |
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Denise
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Sooooo beautiful, Rainbow! Denise |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Beautifully written. |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lovely! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
RG, Beautiful poem, beautifully written!! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
The title drew me in, then did the poem Beautiful! Liz |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Lovely, RG! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beautiful RG |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
So very Sweet Rainbow......and thank you for being an angel in my life.... A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
really beautiful rainbow, loved this....guess I give ol HT a good work out...poor thing the work is never gonna be done ROFG....big hugs |
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Poet deVine
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Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is a wonderful poem! You are both a rainbow and an Angel! |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Bless... Thanks all, it's more a case of thinking like an angel and acting like a little devil...ooops Big HUGS Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
RG, Hey over here, I've been waiting a long time I hope one gets here before I'm gone. *L* Sy |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Rainbow Girl, I liked your view on angels...what great things that they are...interesting title too! Starboards |
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JTF Member
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Posts 319France |
Rainbow, you do deserve to be called Angel ... |
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cjs9853 Junior Member
since 1999-11-26
Posts 44smyrna, tn usa. |
really beautiful rainbow like you. merry christmas. love that angel JTF put on his reply |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Yes angels live inside our heads... I know several who have Thrived in mine... ;-) Well done RainbowGirl |
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JTF Member
since 1999-08-09
Posts 319France |
Yoooooooooo ! Welcome here Feathered one ... I bet you're going to love that place ... |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Seymour, Just make sure you duck, sometimes they're flying low..*g* HUGS Starboards: Well they help you to sleep at night.. HUGS JTF: Thanks for the pic but heck, my hair just isn't that long yet..thanks sweetheart HUSG CJS: Tis lovely, I agree.. HUGS LR/NH: Great to see you here and huge whopping great big HUSG...LOL Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream... |
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Michael
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Posts 7666California |
Wow, RG, what a beautiful work. I've probably made an angel or two cry in my time...sigh. Great poem. Michael |
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Betty Gravitt Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 222Georgia United States |
RainbowGirl it is so beautiful when you see an angel. Thank you. I do believe in angels. B Gravitt |
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Coegwyr Junior Member
since 1999-12-20
Posts 35 |
A beautiful poem from a beautiful person, sort of an angel on angels, I like it. |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Great poem and you are one angel of a poet too! Nathan |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
You've certainly earned your wings as far as I'm concerned You're definitely Passions' own Rainbow-Angel! HUGS It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
I never believed that angels were amongst us until i met my wife she told me that they in fact are ooooo dis!! greato poem rainbow (applauds) |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
This is very sweet Enjoyed this Rainbow Girl Share what you are for you are what you share |
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