Open Poetry #4 |
It's alright (a cadence with some additions by me) |
desperado Member
since 1999-05-24
Posts 312FT Hood,Tx |
It's alright, it's alright It's alright, it's ok It's alright, it's alright It's alright, it's ok Remember JFK He tried to pave the way To make a better day It's alright, it's ok But then they shot him down From up in downtown It was a lonesome sound As that flag came down It's alright, it's alright It's alright, it's ok It's alright, it's alright It's alright, it's ok Remember MLK He tried to pave the way To make a better day It's alright, it's ok For he was killed one morn When the world was torn It was a painful thorn And the world did mourn It's alright, it's alright It's alright, it's ok It's alright, it's alright It's alright, it's ok Remember me some day I tried to pave the way To make a better day It's alright, it's ok It's alright, it's alright It's alright, it's ok It's alright, it's alright It's alright, it's ok Basic is going good. just on leave right now for christmas so I'm getting on. I've met alot of really great people that have meant alot to me these past few weeks. can't wait to go back and finish up. well actually I think I can. lol shine a light so bright that all can see and you will find the joys that echo within me |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome home, Des! You have been missed! I'm glad you have met some great people there! That sure can help when you are away from home! I like your poem. Denise |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
All right you - didn't I tell you that it's always two words? Oh - That was Intruder.... yeah.... That's all right then... But - where's the pic????? Left...Left, Right, Left.... |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Glad to see your back for a while. Happy to hear you met some great people! Pave the way of a better tomorrow! Merry Christmas Des! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Hey...it's great to hear you're doing well and home for the holidays!! Seemed like you picked a good time to be at basic training. Nice to see you back on for a while and happy Holidays! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Very interesting poem--I liked the style--glad to see your name here again and to hear you're doing well. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Good to hear from you, Des. Glad all is going O.K. Glad to see you're still wanting to make a difference - I hope that quality never escapes you, friend. Michael |
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desperado Member
since 1999-05-24
Posts 312FT Hood,Tx |
thanks you guys. and as for the picture nan, my message icon says it all. it's on there somewhere... perhaps I'll write something I actually like instead of the disjunctured ramblings of someone too tired to remember what a "b" looks like... *wink* shine a light so bright that all can see and you will find the joys that echo within me |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Yes, it is alright, its okay...i like this one...welcome! |
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