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Morning Stuff |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL 
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Morning Stuff Of misted valleys spread out across the countryside as spider's webs like the veins on the back of my grandma's hands and of warming hilltops shaking off a blanket of fog that allows not the sleeping in for dreaming time is over and to miss morning stuff is to miss a dream come true. Robert if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
RobertB, Well I guess that depends on the stuff. Enjoyed the read. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Nice poem, I enjoyed it Liz |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Yawn...did someone say morning? What's that? Just joking Robert. Though I do sleep in way too much, nothing is quite like the morning...especially getting up to watch dawn. Good job. Michael |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Dawn is the very bestest..... and I'm fortunate enough to see its splendiforous rise over the Atlantic.... 'tis a wonderful sight to behold....  |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Ahhh...unfortunately I usually see dawn through the windshield of my car...on my way to work (ugh!) But your poem is lovely, and accurately describes those mornings I have sat on the porch, with no particular place to go, and watched the world unfurl in light. < !signature--> It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain [This message has been edited by caroline (edited 12-18-1999).] |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
I really enjoyed all your comments.....it is so neat to see what a few words can evoke from other's minds. Thank you all!!! Robert |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I like this very much, Robert, although I prefer sleeping in as much as possible! Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I really like this Robert |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Robert this was good! My grandma had those veins in here hand and when I was little I used to call them spiders. hehe...thanks for that memory! Miss a lot when we don't see the morning, the beautiful sunrises and such. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Tequilia_Sunrise Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada |
great |
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