Open Poetry #4 |
Angel Wings - Inspired by Caroline |
Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Angel Wings Angel wings Gently around me My soul sings Ever so deeply Feeling peaceful and Ever so grand Lovely and sound Lifting high Of the ground Angel wings Softly caress This simple heart In such a mess Angel wings Take me there To that place Heaven's Lair. What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
You see? You really do swish your Angel wings and lovely poetry noises rise out of your pen! Beautiful, DA It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Angel girl, this is beautiful! Well met challenge I must say! <*\\\>< Jesus is the reason for the season |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Simply beautiful, Dark Angel! Lovely Angel Wings! Denise |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Lovely...simply lovely DA A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Beautiful in it's simplicity and lovely in it's form. . . DarkAngel, perhaps you are not so dark. . . That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beautiful DA...beautiful |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
DA: Sounds like a peaceful moment, beautiful! HUGS Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Sweet Caroline, Thanks you so much for your lovely comment ------------------- WhtDove, a comment that Caroline made inspired me to write this, Thanks for your lovley comment Angel. ------------------- Thanks so much Denise ------------------- Thank you Pepper ------------------- Sven, Thank you, Perhaps I'm not so Dark ------------------- Ruth thanks Hon so very much. ------------------- Yes very peaceful, thanks RG *HUGS* What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Ah, DA - this is so soft, I really like it. K |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I feel warmed by the caress of angel wings Beautiful Liz |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
It's very sweet. I like the form, too. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
No darkness here, Angel. Beauty and light abounds. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Severn, Ellizabeth, Sandgrain and Balladeer, thank you all so very much What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Tres belle DA!!!!!!! Your writing just gets better and better with every poem. May your angel wings always be there to carry you softly....... |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Your darkness is blessed with sunshine.... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkAngel - On angel wings you were sent .. with this verse of merriment. I hear the whirring of angel's wings. In her heart a song she brings. *This is JUST LOVELY ! ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Moonshine, thanks so much Hon ------------ thats so sweet Nan thank you ------------ Marge, such a lovely poem thank you Thank You All ! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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