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Dark Angel
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0 posted 1999-12-17 08:37 AM



Angel Wings

Angel wings
Gently around me
My soul sings
Ever so deeply
Feeling peaceful and
Ever so grand
Lovely and sound
Lifting high
Of the ground
Angel wings
Softly caress
This simple heart
In such a mess
Angel wings
Take me there
To that place
Heaven's Lair.



 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



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caroline
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1 posted 1999-12-17 08:53 AM


You see?  You really do swish your Angel wings and lovely poetry noises rise out of your pen! Beautiful, DA  

 It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain



WhtDove
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2 posted 1999-12-17 10:48 AM


Angel girl, this is beautiful! Well met challenge I must say!  

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Jesus is the reason for the season


Denise
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3 posted 1999-12-17 11:05 AM


Simply beautiful, Dark Angel! Lovely Angel Wings!  

 Denise



Pepper
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4 posted 1999-12-17 12:21 PM


Lovely...simply lovely DA  


 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!



Sven
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5 posted 1999-12-17 12:41 PM


Beautiful in it's simplicity and lovely in it's form. . .

DarkAngel, perhaps you are not so dark. . .

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl



hoot_owl_rn
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6 posted 1999-12-17 02:51 PM


Beautiful DA...beautiful  
RainbowGirl
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7 posted 1999-12-17 03:04 PM


DA: Sounds like a peaceful moment, beautiful!

HUGS

 Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream...



Dark Angel
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8 posted 1999-12-17 04:30 PM


Sweet Caroline, Thanks you so much for your lovely comment  

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WhtDove, a comment that Caroline made inspired me to write this,   Thanks for your lovley comment Angel.
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Thanks so much Denise  
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Thank you Pepper  
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Sven, Thank you, Perhaps I'm not so Dark  
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Ruth thanks Hon so very much.  
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Yes very peaceful, thanks RG *HUGS*

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



Severn
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9 posted 1999-12-17 07:10 PM


Ah, DA - this is so soft, I really like it.

K

Elizabeth Santos
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10 posted 1999-12-17 08:36 PM


I feel warmed by the caress of angel wings
Beautiful
Liz

sandgrain
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11 posted 1999-12-17 08:49 PM


It's very sweet.  I like the form, too.
Balladeer
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12 posted 1999-12-17 09:38 PM


No darkness here, Angel. Beauty and light abounds.
Dark Angel
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13 posted 1999-12-17 11:48 PM


Severn, Ellizabeth, Sandgrain and Balladeer, thank you all so very much  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



Moonshine
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14 posted 1999-12-18 10:06 AM


Tres belle DA!!!!!!!
Your writing just gets better and better with every poem. May your angel wings always be there to carry you softly.......

Nan
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15 posted 1999-12-18 10:32 AM


Your darkness is blessed with sunshine....

Marge Tindal
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16 posted 1999-12-18 11:40 AM


DarkAngel -

On angel wings
you were sent ..
with this verse
of merriment.

I hear the whirring
of angel's wings.
In her heart
a song she brings.

*This is JUST LOVELY !


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com



Dark Angel
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17 posted 1999-12-18 11:05 PM


Moonshine, thanks so much Hon  
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thats so sweet Nan thank you  
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Marge, such a lovely poem thank you  

Thank You All !

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



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