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Open Poetry #4

All My Love

Justina
Junior Member

since 1999-10-31

Posts 24
Kansas City. MO

0 posted 1999-12-16 10:44 PM

When times get hard
And days go bad,
Stop and think
Of the Love we have.
It seems so good
And all so great
I wonder if it ever
Could be a mistake?
You were once my friend,
And now my Lover
There is no one else
For me to discover.
Now that we're Lovers
And better friends,
I don't want our
Dream to ever end.
You mean more than
Words could ever say,
But I need the reassurance
That you will stay.
I made up my mind long ago,
And I don't intend
To let you go!

cooljust
New Member

since 1999-12-15

Posts 6

1 posted 1999-12-16 11:34 PM

Girl, you have skillz! Keep up the good work. I look for your work specifically because of the last one you wrote, I knew it would only get better.

Justin

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 1999-12-17 01:04 AM

Justina, I enjoyed this very much!

Denise

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

3 posted 1999-12-17 05:43 AM

Don't think I've welcomed you yet - so...welcome!

Nice poem.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 1999-12-17 07:08 AM

Justina -

Friend to lover ..
what a great journey!
~*Marge*~

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