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wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

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TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 1999-12-16 02:16 AM

A wonderful occurrence unfolding in my mind
Slowly it blossoms from the splinters that I find
The tapestry was woven before I was to be
Each fragment of the masterpiece goes with what I see

If sometimes it seems unreal prick me with the pin
That drives through the tapestry until it never ends
I might seem small to me but I know I’m not to you
You’re my God the Great I Am from the first thread I grew

There I am I went by so fast it might ne’er be known
How I loved one woman and all my family’s grown
Paint a happy smile for me on the lil man’s head
Then my story will be told with one single thread

[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 12-16-1999).]

poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25

Posts 2646
Arkansas

1 posted 1999-12-16 09:12 AM

Ah Walt...reading this makes my heart bleed! Argh! How beautifully you spun this wonderful little tale - I loved the whole concept of comparing yourself to a single thread! Fabulous darling, really! So short, but oh so sweet ! Bravo! (standing up and applauding loudly!)

"You're my God...from the first thread I grew..." 'Twas my favorite line, BTW!

- - - If I can just touch you once, then I feel I have accomplished what I am called to do...- - pFF

Mike
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since 1999-06-19

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2 posted 1999-12-16 10:00 AM

Another excellent poem from the Lone State State. Enjoyed Walt.

[This message has been edited by Mike (edited 12-16-1999).]

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

3 posted 1999-12-16 11:39 AM

Hy Walt,
This was a god one, really enjoyed the read.

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05

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Glen Hope, PA USA

4 posted 1999-12-16 12:14 PM

Very nice Walt

Denise

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5 posted 1999-12-16 02:20 PM

Yes, very nice! I enjoyed this much!

Denise

Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05

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Bewilderment , USA

6 posted 1999-12-16 04:44 PM

I do admire your warp and woof
You're way out Walt
Right through the roof

Nan

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since 1999-05-20

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7 posted 1999-12-16 06:22 PM

They certainly did break the mold when walt came around...... You're one of a kind, my friend..... Nice poem, too......

Poet deVine

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Hurricane Alley

8 posted 1999-12-16 07:37 PM

I am impressed! This is a deep, thoughtful poem Walt! I'm glad to see you posting your poetry again!

DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22

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9 posted 1999-12-16 11:34 PM

Getting philosophical again walt?

Good deal my friend.

Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©
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"Either kill me or take me as I am,
because I'll be damned if I ever change..."

Count Donatien Alphonse Francois de Sade
(Marquis de Sade)

Michael

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since 1999-08-13

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California

10 posted 1999-12-16 11:58 PM

Excellent piece Walt... I can feel the emotion behind it.

Michael

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