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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Stage Struck Moon ~Marge Tindal~ 1999 She holds such charm as she slowly moves across the vast stage of my night. A performance worthy of accolades. She bows and the curtains of night close. The curtains of the sunny morning open and she exits from my view. And then I realize ... she's doing an encore for someone else half a world away. Encore ! Encore ! ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Marge, you have outdone yourself, my friend. This is an exquisite piece. Love ya, K |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Marge! Great performance! Encore! I applaud this piece. :iz |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Severn - Why, aren't you just the sweetest. Thank you. I hope the moonbeams reach you with smiles across the miles. Elizabeth, my friend - So glad you liked it too. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Encore, Encore  Nicely done Marge |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
There's a sound of an echo here.. HUGS Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream... |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, Marge! I love it!  Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
 Across the stage she comes again meeting her audience with beams in the night. She won't be around to read the reviews when morning breaks with light. *Thank you, my friends. Encore finis` ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Hey, this is cool, Marge! I love the metaphor in this piece. Nail to the mast her holy flag, Set every threadbare sail- And give her to the god of storms, The lightning and the gale! -Oliver Wendell Holmes |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Wow Marge.....yep..now I see!!!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth - Thank you. The moon is my spirit. RobertB - Thanks to you, to Kevin and to mother nature for the inspiration for this piece. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Wonderful , Margie. May we continue to get mooned! |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Excellent. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Balladeer - Thanks for enjoying it ... The poem ! The poem ! And just wait until Toe finds out you want to get 'mooned' ! Mike - Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked this piece. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Justina Junior Member
since 1999-10-31
Posts 24Kansas City. MO |
Very well done without a doubt! Justina |
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Seaangel Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 167Auckland, New Zealand |
Wonderful, Marge!! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
You're the best Marge, the moon told me so, and I said, I know. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Justina - I'm glad you liked it. SeaAngel - The wonder of her light is sent into our night. Glad you found it wonderful. Martie - The moon just inspires, doesn't it? What a thoughtful comment from you. Thank you. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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