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Could There Be?
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Could There Be? |
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UNLOVED-1 Junior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 16dominican republic |
"Could There Be?" Could there be a day without a night? Could there be wrong without right? Could there be stars without a sky? Could there be truth without a lie? Could there be a garden without a flower? Could there be sweet without sour? Could there be love without a heart? Could there be love being apart? Could there be you without me? Is it like shakespear said to be or not to be? I don't know if that is true. But there couldn't be me without you. Otis Omar otis omar |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions. This is a beautiful piece. The one this is written for is lucky to have you. I hope to see more of you.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Unloved, Welcome and I enjoyed the read. |
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Ayla Member
since 1999-08-31
Posts 50 |
This is a lovely poem. : ) Yesterday is history.Tomorrow is a mystery.Today is a Gift.That's why we call it The Present. - The Millennium Bug |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
WELCOME! I really liked this! Lots of questions and that's good, I hope you get the answers that make a happy heart! <*\\\>< Jesus is the reason for the season |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! I liked this a lot. If I can ever be of assistance, please let me know! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
If you love someone, it's hard to be without them Nicely Done! Welcome! LIz |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Welcome to Passions Unloved I enjoyed your piece..< !signature--> A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! [This message has been edited by Pepper (edited 12-15-1999).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Welcome my friend. . . This is very good. . . from the heart. . . that's where the best words come from. . . look forward to reading more of your work! That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Welcome, welcome, welcome. Nice entry.  |
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UNLOVED-1 Junior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 16dominican republic |
thank you all for welcoming me into your family. i really feel that i am one of you thanks to your nice recievement. all i can say is that in each and everyone of my poems i write what i feel from the bottom of my heart. THANK YOU VERY MUCH!!! otis omar |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
Welcome to Passions, Otis. Pull up a computer chair and relax. Nice enterance by the way.  Very heartfelt poem. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is sweet! Welcome to Passions! Denise |
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