Open Poetry #4 |
Guess what I'm playing with |
hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Butterfly flies high Cocoon lies on ground below Symbol of freedom __________________________________________ Multi-colored leaves Decked out in vivid display Herald in winter ___________________________________________ Small seed lays dormant Underneath thick winter snow Hope springs eternal ____________________________________________ One tiny gray mouse One large hungry cat makes two Only one remains ____________________________________________ Blood red summer rose It’s freshly opened blossom Feasts on morning dew ------------------ Alis volat propriis (She flies with her own wings) |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Very nice Hoot....(But I know what I wish you were playing with?...LOL) |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
A poet we call hoot simple from the heart an ageless art |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Are you playing with yourself??? [This message has been edited by LngJhnAg (edited 11-12-1999).] |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
um...a slinky? You can borrow mine if you don't have one of your own. ------------------ Once I was brilliant, now I no longer shine, but the twinkle in my eye speaks of another time. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
I'm not going there... or there... or over there. By the way... nice hykoos? hichoos? hachoos? (Bless you) However you spell those thinggies. |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Hmmm Ruth....great hiaku's (spelled this way Andrew...lol)....But I wasn't sure what I was getting myself into with this one...lol. I know what you where playing with last night...but do you know what I.....never mind...lmao. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
LOL....I knew that title would get a few minds wondering. And Toe, you would have disappointed me had you not jumped on that one like you did LJA...only in the form of poetry RSE....hmmm.....shall I comment on that one...LOL Scott...LOL, thanks Marilyn...naughty girl Martie...thanks for the haiku |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Beautiful Ruth ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Craig Member
since 1999-06-10
Posts 444 |
Could it be a bunch of Poets? Well written Hoot. ------------------ Yes, I admit your general rule. That every poet is a fool: But I myself may serve to show it. That every fool is not a poet. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
So this is what hiaku's are ! think I'm gonna skip the next round in class....you're too good ! : ) |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Lovely, I enjoyed these little ones! ------------------ Denise |
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