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What Your Man Wants To Hear
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What Your Man Wants To Hear |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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How Do I express my heart deep enough, As deep as the love I hold for you, Let me give you all of me, Honestly and completely, You are my dream come true, My knight, My shinning star, You are so sweet, Sweet as honey, Your love is honest and true, Oh how do I say I love you, Let me hold you, Let me love you, Come into these waiting arms you find, Come quickly my love, Where our love is music, And our love is rhyme, Let me kiss you softly, I will whisper in your ear, All the things I love about you dear, I will take care of you, I will bandage the wounds inside the deepest place in your heart, You are my treasure, My one desire, Fuel to my flame, To add to my loves fire, You are my man, I am your lady, Prince and princess, Upon the everafter, Where love never dies, And time passes faster, I want to be your treasure, Your queen, The Jewel in your crown, To always put a smile upon your face, and never let you down, Oh my dearest, I am lost, Come find me here, Waiting to hear, Your reply, your heart to speak, I can feel you are near, For your love is not weak, You are so sexy, You handsome face evades me, I am drawn to you, As a moth to a flame, Your words are respected and tame, You are my king, my hero, number one, not zero, I will honor you and cherrish you forever, You are my treasure, A rare jewel to be admired, For all the word to see, I will polish you with my love, For all eternity, So I hope these are words you have wanted to hear, Expressed from the depths of my heart, Just for you my dear, One more thing before I go, Just reply to let me know, Hold me close and never let me go... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Romantic Heart, A little pun, A little fun, A little over done. I think you would send him south, Before he could open his mouth. But I enjoyed the read, good work. |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Well, whomever you wrote this for I see as quite lucky to have someone as such as you! A romantic heart indeed! Great job! ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
I like it, but the name of the topic was quite different from what was in it. Good Job |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Wouldn't it be a wunnerful world if we could all just whisper those things we want to hear from each other???.... You surely are a romantic one....  |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
Good job Romantic Heart! "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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