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DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

0 posted 1999-12-12 08:43 PM

Frailties of the flesh
led to my demise.
I wander afresh
across fields of lies.
At every crossroads
a choice must be made.
No matter the goads
my rage must be stayed.
I travel a path
that is paved with pain
In despair I laugh
at what was to gain.
For the road I walk
will lead evermore
to actions that balk
the Light I adore.
In shadows I live
to avoid that Light,
it takes all I give
then it steals my might.
No judge can there be
to immoral crime
nor do the blind see
before comes their time.
Closed minds open first
to sins of the past;
Justice slakes no thirst
upon dies miscast.

©1999 DreamEvil
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Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©
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"Either kill me or take me as I am,
because I'll be damned if I ever change..."

Count Donatien Alphonse Francois de Sade
(Marquis de Sade)

[This message has been edited by DreamEvil (edited 12-12-1999).]

caroline
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since 1999-08-16

Posts 1218
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1 posted 1999-12-12 10:00 PM

Don't despair, for there is still much to gain. Excellent verse, as per your usual.

It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

2 posted 1999-12-12 10:11 PM

"Closed minds open first
to sins of the past;"
How true those words. There is nothing harder to overcome than the reputation earned by ones past mistakes. Well stated words Scott.

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

3 posted 1999-12-12 10:11 PM

Wonderfully done, my dear friend. As always.

*Krista Knutson*

"I can feel you breathe, it's washing over me, and suddenly I'm melting into you..." ~Faith Hill: Breathe~

First__Knight
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since 1999-11-08

Posts 678

4 posted 1999-12-12 11:32 PM

Oooo I am begining to understand your name.....LOL This came on strong and held pace until the end..Very nice. I find myself looking for your work....... as it is often powerful in its very meaning.

Share what you are for you are what you share

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

5 posted 1999-12-12 11:41 PM

Again (I say this to you a lot lately), excellent work Scott. Whatever you are doing.. keep it up!

poetFemmeFatale
Member Elite

since 1999-07-25

Posts 2646
Arkansas

6 posted 1999-12-13 12:18 PM

I too want to echo all the above! The title pulled me in, and I liked what I read ! Powerfully moving as all your work is ! Thanks for the trip - deep & dark it was!

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

7 posted 1999-12-13 02:36 AM

Dark as ever, dark one - and excellent.

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

8 posted 1999-12-13 03:09 AM

yuh dream well sone as usual like the last two lines alot i do

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

9 posted 1999-12-13 04:09 AM

Excellent Soul-brother, as always

What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

Rod
Member

since 1999-12-08

Posts 149
Auckland New Zealand

10 posted 1999-12-13 04:17 AM

Very powerful - I like it!
It has a great poetic feel to it.
Well done!

RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31

Posts 3023
United Kingdom

11 posted 1999-12-13 06:43 AM

DE: Thought provoking as usual...

HUGS

Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream...

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