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The Lady
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The Lady |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678
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 The Lady ~First Knight~ The day fades into night, as birds begin their flight, When shadows come to this land of ours. A knight with a purpose, Who often feels worthless, For his search that leads to the stars He searches for a lady, a secret treasure not found To hold his love, and her heart unbound. With a loving embrace, moonlight and lace, Spirit and grace, with a loving face, Does my dream lead me so far? I would sit at her feet, serve and not cheat. Should she rule with the softest of hand. Her cup will overflow, As I watch our love grow, And she will drink from the saucer I plan. Another day has gone, My thoughts wander on, Of dreams of glory to be. My plans of life, Passions with a wife, And love for all eternity Share what you are for you are what you share |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
So tender and beautiful...  K |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
The last stanza says it all..... |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
Breathtaking first night, truly. "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
First_Knight - Breathtaking honesty. Refreshingly sincere. Very nice job. I like it. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Could a lady fair Dare to compair With words as heartfelt as yours They strike to the heart Make one want a new start Where darkness once claimed a sad soul Very nice one David, I enjoyed it as usual. [This message has been edited by hoot_owl_rn (edited 12-12-1999).] |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Beautiful Read Jenny Lee Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful! Very lovely! Denise |
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Eboni Junior Member
since 1999-12-11
Posts 17Texas |
Great poetry! |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Severn- Your words always become you ..Thanks Nan- Thank you Saxxoness- Love your nic. Thank you for reading Marge- I could only hope to ever become as good as you JennyLee- Thank you Denise- I am glad I could share it. Eboni- Thank you too Ruth- Make your way, and follow your heart, Come to me and I will give you that start. Don't delay for the time is close, Start on the path that leads to the coast. To the oceans of love I can give to you Sharing and caring before I am through. Will you take my hand and give the chance That maybe you will find the road to romance. Share what you are for you are what you share |
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