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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 1999-12-11 09:20 PM



      My rock

The metamorphic
Womb of time.
Births drop by drop,
The heavens void,
Unborn to born,
By secret means,
Flowering the perpetuity,
Of annihilation
In incalculable,
Changing oblivion.
As I pray on this rock.


© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Severn
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since 1999-07-17
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1 posted 1999-12-11 09:43 PM


Phew!
- Intense.
Running for the dictionary..hehe.

Denise
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2 posted 1999-12-11 09:50 PM


Somber piece, Seymour...intense it is. Well done. Perfect ending!

 Denise



Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
3 posted 1999-12-11 11:06 PM


Severn,
How deep is deep?
Bless you Sy *L*
Denise,
It is said every rock is a temple.
I was just saying a prayer. *L*

Michael
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4 posted 1999-12-11 11:14 PM


Wow...awesome piece, Sy.  Very powerful words.  Me likes this one much.  

Michael


hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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5 posted 1999-12-12 11:17 AM


Very deep
Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 1999-12-12 03:16 PM


Michael,
Your remark was worth writing the poem, thanks.
Hoot,
Deep is good. *L*

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