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amber
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since 1999-06-15
Posts 240
los banos, ca,

0 posted 1999-12-10 05:59 PM



Take me in, and let me be,
All that you can not see,
Everything I was ment to say,
Blends to nothing, fades away.

In a distant far gone place,
I'm sitting silent in your embrace,
Such a tuanted sweet placed grin,
To thrive upon love that im living in.

Take me now and take me sweet,
Let our eyes and bodies meet,
Wipe the tears that soon will fall,
Becuase once agian you have my all.

Lost inside your fading now,
Your heat from my skin somehow,
Yet your body is still near my own,
But my heart can never be your home.

"I know it takes to much to love you."

So I let the feeling slip away,
Hoping youll be tamed someday,
Kiss me sweet and say goodbye,
I must sleep alone to night.

You pleasure me, yet hurt me so,
But all this pain I will not show,
This burden is mine, and mine alone,
You'll move on and never know.

You glance back a time or two,
Just to see me in love with you,
I'll close my heart until you come agian,
And say to myself that were just friends.

So tonight the tears will fall,
The pain will thrive and memories call,
But I'll force my heart to heal and mend,
Until you come around agian.

"And I'll give so much just to love you"

© Copyright 1999 amber jean white - All Rights Reserved
Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

1 posted 1999-12-10 09:14 PM


Nice.  
lostboy
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since 1999-11-21
Posts 275
New Hampshire, USA
2 posted 1999-12-11 10:12 AM


I like this a lot amber. I agree w/ you. It should never be too much to love someone, I think it should come easy, from both directions.
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