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Perfect World |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
This poem depicts how I really feel. A perfect world, is something that I desire. A perfect world, is something that the Lord didn't require. A perfect world, is a world with no crime and no knowledge of time. I guess that I'm too foolish to see that my concept of life could never be. But as we can see, that everyone is not happy. Naturally me, I just wanna be happy. By now, I should have already accepted the ultimatum of what the world will never become. Nathan |
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Dolphins3 Member
since 1999-09-30
Posts 135Wisconsin |
Nate, I think we all wish the world would be like this. Nice poem. Keep up the great work.  |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
If the world were perfect there would be no room for improvment! Although, I too wish it were a perfect place in which to live. Or at least a place with a lot less problems. JOY |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nate - Interesting look at the world. I find that 'perfect' is unachievable therefore ... we must make it what we want it to be. This complicated world in which we reside gives us all the chance to take a chance and therefore stand side by side. Accepting the ultimate of time life is what we make it, friend of mine. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
To strive for perfection is not bad if it does not leave you heartbroken if not achieved. Me, I accept the best effort, even if it falls short of perfection. Aim for a star and hit the moon is still a pretty good achievement! Nice poem. |
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