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vandana
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since 1999-10-22
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0 posted 1999-12-10 11:24 AM



This is my heaven ,
Come to me
And you make my dreams come true,
You brought me heaven,
Beneath the sky besides sea,
This is my heaven when you come to me,
This is my dreams,
Being close with you,
The stars above,
You holding my hand,
Make It last foever,
You gave your love to me,
The stars shone all night,
As we make It last forever,
You held me tight,
As you were loving me,
You were mine forever,
Untill the time was right for us,
You're my world,
As you love me,
You gave me heaven,
You came closer to me,
And make It last forever,

© Copyright 1999 vandana - All Rights Reserved
Betty Gravitt
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since 1999-09-11
Posts 222
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1 posted 1999-12-10 01:12 PM


this is wonderful Vandana. I enjoy your work very much.

 B Gravitt



Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

2 posted 1999-12-11 03:21 PM


Lovely thoughts, Vandana. Lovely!

 Denise



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