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Elizabeth Santos
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0 posted 1999-12-10 07:37 AM


He Is There

I am here, and he is there
The spirit is so full aware
And visits with him every night
To soothe its vacant, weary plight

Then soul to soul the duo meet
And mind to mind the two complete
But my heart cries a weary tear
That he is there, and I am here

Though comforts in its soft aware
That he is always there

Elizabeth Santos



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suthern
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1 posted 1999-12-10 08:11 AM


How true... it's such a comfort knowing he's there... and such a sorrow that he's THERE instead of beside you. *S* Great job!
Betty Gravitt
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2 posted 1999-12-10 08:25 AM


Elizabeth thank you. (((HUGS)))

 B Gravitt



Elizabeth Santos
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3 posted 1999-12-10 09:44 AM


Betty and Suthern,
Looks like this hit a chord
Glad you liked it
Liz

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4 posted 1999-12-10 10:52 AM


Yes, my friend,you have struck a chord. . . one whose music I have not heard in a while... thank you. . .

Beautiful, as always. . .

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl



Denise
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5 posted 1999-12-10 08:51 PM


Beautiful! Very very lovely!

 Denise



Severn
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6 posted 1999-12-10 08:54 PM


Ah Liz - this is beautiful.
Simple, yet rich.
Great work.  K

WhtDove
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7 posted 1999-12-14 10:41 PM


Lovely Elizabeth!

 <*\\\><
Jesus is the reason for the season


Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 1999-12-14 11:07 PM


Elizabeth,
This something I would steal.
Exquisite.

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 1999-12-15 06:02 PM


Elizabeth,
This gem should not be allowed to fade away.
It is not my say alone, but every say. *L*

Elizabeth Santos
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Pennsylvania
10 posted 1999-12-15 06:15 PM


Thank you all for the compliments on such a simple verse.
Sy,
'twould be a very foolish steal
for one whose talent is the real
thank you
Liz

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