Open Poetry #4 |
He Is There |
Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
He Is There I am here, and he is there The spirit is so full aware And visits with him every night To soothe its vacant, weary plight Then soul to soul the duo meet And mind to mind the two complete But my heart cries a weary tear That he is there, and I am here Though comforts in its soft aware That he is always there Elizabeth Santos |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
How true... it's such a comfort knowing he's there... and such a sorrow that he's THERE instead of beside you. *S* Great job! |
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Betty Gravitt Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 222Georgia United States |
Elizabeth thank you. (((HUGS))) B Gravitt |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Betty and Suthern, Looks like this hit a chord Glad you liked it Liz |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Yes, my friend,you have struck a chord. . . one whose music I have not heard in a while... thank you. . . Beautiful, as always. . . That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful! Very very lovely! Denise |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Ah Liz - this is beautiful. Simple, yet rich. Great work. K |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Lovely Elizabeth! <*\\\>< Jesus is the reason for the season |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, This something I would steal. Exquisite. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, This gem should not be allowed to fade away. It is not my say alone, but every say. *L* |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Thank you all for the compliments on such a simple verse. Sy, 'twould be a very foolish steal for one whose talent is the real thank you Liz |
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