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Tease Me ... Please Me ... And You Do
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Tease Me ... Please Me ... And You Do |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Tease Me ... Please Me ... And You Do ~Marge Tindal~ 1999 You start with gentle caresses. Slowly working your way to the very parts that await your touch. I am putty in your hands. Sculptor that you are, you run your fingers over the wet clay ... taking me away. Manipulating, kneading, slowly bringing me to the desired temperature. Once over ... all over. Taking little, giving much. A gentleness that takes me to the rim ... not beyond. Not yet. You play. You stay. You delight me in every way. I am rising to your touch. Warming to the heat. Suddenly more fervent gestures stimulate me to peak. Rising, falling. Rising again. Lost amidst the sweet surrender. Wanting more. Giving no less. You return to places already caressed. Again, again ... I sigh for the end. It subsides, but returns, like the waves with the tide. Covering me again in your power, you bring me to completion. Then you hold me close and start over again. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, You had some lines that just sang, The paint was great and my bell rang. *L* |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Didn't I tell you she exposes her love life to the world? Marge, is there anything you're holding back from us? This poem was almost expicit but quite exquisite. Liz |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Well, call me MichaelAngelo. I'll even act like Picasso. Around your flagpole I will rally If you ever want to Dali! Marge, this is quite a poem! Very stimulating to the, er, mind! Well done. [This message has been edited by Balladeer (edited 12-09-1999).] |
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Betty Gravitt Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 222Georgia United States |
Marge just two words... "go girl" B Gravitt |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Why, friends. Thank you so very much for enjoying a rendering of the simple task of making HOMEMADE BREAD AND YEAST ROLLS ! Mixing, kneading, letting rise, kneading again, covering to rise ... shaped again, completed by the baking ... then enjoyed again. Whatever were you thinking?  Ah, the minds of poets ! Words take us where we let them, don't they? ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Or maybe, just maybe a sculptor working his clay. Shaping and molding ... never quite content. Wondering, as he dampens the cloth and covers it each night, if it will respond to his kneading touch on the next round. The clay cries out ... make me ... bring me to completion. Make me ... bake me. The sculptor does ... and then slides his hands once more over the piece ... both of them content at last. *Could be ! ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge, you are such a tease--bread...I don't think so, but if that's what you want us to believe....I loved the poem which ever way it reads. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Well, Marge, that's the YEAST you can do!!! As far as creating a statue, well, this poem does do that! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Okay Girl....you keep these up you're going to have to move on over to adult Another nice one |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Bread rolls, huh? I ain't even gonna touch on that one. Great poem, *shaking head*, "and I'm the Pilsbury Dough Boy!" Michael |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Dear me, and poor me thought you were talking about eating chocolate!!! Sigh - and it was mere bread... Care for Vienna sausage, Marge?  Great writing, my friend! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Marge is so completely free I wish she lived next door to me I'd laugh my head off every day With stories of her potter's clay |
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