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Pool Of Remembrance
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Pool Of Remembrance |
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Mystic Essence Junior Member
since 1999-09-29
Posts 28 |
Violets slightly misted With an angel's sigh Smeared across emerald lands Within my imagination The jewels of my past Sparkle in azure pools I gaze upon a vision Of you, my love Dancing within the blue My finger traces Lingering above your face Then plunging Into the cool dews Your image shimmers Then fades silently The crystal droplets Once held you Now only hold my sorrow Bitter tears Clinging to my memories As I turn away Knowing never again Will I touch you Only will I chase The moistened droplets Of your soul And forever only know you As a tiny wave In my pool of remembrance ------------------ My tears are but a glimpse into the fiery tempest of my soul.~© Althea Willow, 1999~ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so touching. Wonderful, heartfelt piece! ------------------ Denise |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mystic ... this is beautiful. The imagery wrapped in these lines is as clear as the 'pool of remembrance': 'Knowing never again Will I touch you Only will I chase The moistened droplets Of your soul' Absolutely beautiful. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Mystical writings, so beautiful and wonderful imagery. So glad I got to read this one. Love it!!  ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
If I could write free verse, I would wish for it to be half as good as this. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Excellent verse |
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Mystic Essence Junior Member
since 1999-09-29
Posts 28 |
Thank you all, it means a lot to me. ------------------ My tears are but a glimpse into the fiery tempest of my soul.~© Althea Willow, 1999~ |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Wonderful, my friend. ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "To be great is to be misunderstood...." - Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Dusk Treader
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since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
Great work, my friend! Beautiful work, I thouroughly enjoyed it. I am honored that I got to preread this. ------------------ "All is gone except the will to be." - Metallica - "For Whom the Bell Tolls" |
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